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Dont flip the car, spoils the composition totally.

Looks like the same girl in different clothes. Looks great though!

This one rocks!

The new ground looks great! Shuttle looks very unfomfortable though, off-balance.

Ah I get you now (feels silly!)

The cyborg is not being refilled, she is not a milk-dispensing-infant-care-cyborg. That was stopped after they started implanting auto-milk-producing-chips inside infant cheeks in 2764. This one is just being tested for proper electronic functioning before release.

It looks nice! I would have made the shadows on the body/limbs have sharp edges instead of the blurred edges.

It looks great! Like you said trees could be differnet and aso make them different heights.

Those are very cool artwork and animation! I like the first walk better, much smoother.

I like it, very different! I think I like the first two versions more.

It is very stylist and has potential (sort of like the comic strip 'James' which also has only sparse line art), but I dont get the humour!

EDIT: I like the hamlet one!

If your software allows it, cut and paste the arm and legs on separate layers. then keep rotating and moving them on the body for the different frames (and move the body up and down). That makes it more easier. I had written a tutorial on this a couple years back but have lost it

She's a cyborg. Couldnt resist the title.

N3T, hehhhe, now the whole pic makes sense

Synth: these are concept sketches, not the comic

Proskrito, I love #4 too. I dont think we can go with 5 though cos she looks a bit older than required. Maybe we can assign a role for her as Missy's godmom or something.

MrMasse: That was cryptic! I am completel clueless bout that statement..

Evil: Will put #6's shoes on #4 then.

Trap, they're undead, its a surprise they even have posture!

The producer of the strip likes #1 for some reason.. will have to convince him otherwise.

These are concept sketches for the main character for a strip called Missy Goth. Slightly over one hour for the bunch. Which do you think is best for a goth humor comic strip with a vampyress as the main character?

Synth - I tried to bury them in the grass but the attempt failed I guess. The guy should have been lower as mrMasse said.

MrMasse - you're right on both points. I think I was there that time in '87 when you pressed the nuke button instead of the coffee dispensing one.

Igor, that hit the spot perfectly! Your addition makes the exact statement I was looking for, thanks!

Hehheh N3T, you're probly right. Hmm.. but then that won't explain the tears..

There's one thing very wrong with the man's pose that spoils the feeling of having been just knocked out. Anyone?

Thanks Igor - when an artist like you praises my work its always an honour!

MrMasse - thanks for that analysis, I hadnt thought about that implication of the image hehheh. You're right about the tank, its just that I'm plain bad at drawing straight lines and stuff, am trying to practise that part with some of these drawings.

Ionas thats great, and its great to hear the next game will be hi-res, much more marketing potential there!

I think the waist should be at least 1.5 times or twice this size to fit in with the face. The legs could be a bit smaller if the waist size was increased. I'm just sticking to the traditional thug prototype though.

Awrk thats beautiful!! They remind me of an online adventure game. whats the name anyone? Not cos they look similar, but cos of the similar Sherlock Holmes type atmosphere!