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I would like each chapter as you finish them! It is also a good motivating factor for the creators as they keep getting feedback for each chapter. How many chapters in all?

I also think you should post a couple of screenshots up there in the first post. It's a beautiful looking game!

[Massacre]

Last two days sketches. The first took an hour and a half, the second an hour.

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My only problem is the nose. From a front view drawing the lower part of the nose is more important than the vertical part, I think.

Looking cool! To add to the chaotic look, you could have some letters go lower than their baseline, and rotate some a bit to the left and right. Only a very few letters.

Remixor, that is exactly what I meant - looking perfect now!

Looking good! If you draw the leg long the arm will fit right in, if you draw the leg small, the arm will look long. If the legs start from where the shirt is ending now, the arm is going to look a little long for sure.

Scotch, you're right, for me clothing is probly harder than nudes. But then I like drawing fantasy and sci-fi, and clothing doesnt have much role in those so I'm happy leaving it alone for the time being.

As for practise, no one can get enough practise. I find myself learning new stuff with each drawing.

Igor, right - Girls piercing themselves is more fun than guys doing the same, it takes violence to a whole new kinky level!

Thanks everyone for the encouraging words!

Dmitri, I had to stretch that leg out to reach the ground, so I guess there is a problem with it.

LGM - Thats the ultimate compliment, I havent managaed to get my hands on the Bone comics yet, but have been admiring its scanned art for a long time!

Barcik - you leave me no choice, I'll instant message you a link to a demo I made which shows off the interface cutscenes etc. The whole game itself is a mess, its completed but  the music's not and the chapters don't link to each other.. And I'm hoping your bouncy car avatar comes back someday!

This one was rather difficult

Dmitri: A dot?? You'll never improve that way, magic easel or not!

Thanks everyone else (I think)!

I dont know too much bout pixel art so no help there. The character is quite good. Here are the things I noticed -

Shoulders too rounded, sort of a hunchback
Nameplate too broad
Odd nose - just the bottom line (v shaped) might be better than an 'L'
Hands should be bigger but they work fine as they are

The 2nd - the less hair on top makes it look better and the face less symetrically framed.

Thanks guys!

Sorry bout making anyone feel bad, I just like to post here as a motivation to keep myself drawing daily!

N3T - what dyu mean digital art? If you mean pixel graphics I dont think I'll ever do that.
About sketching, the only way to get good is practise and practise. You should always carry a sketchpad and pen along so you can draw from real life whenever you feel like. Trees, bench, car, humans, road whatever you see. If you dont like that, try drawing from images on the net, though real life is much better.  And try and draw what you see, not your interpretation of what you see. Stylization can come later, you need to be able to draw accurately first. A beginner book on drawing humans will definitely be helpful, esp as it tells you the correct proportions, and a basic idea of joints and muscles.

You're right MrMasse, tombstones should have been lighter.

Vel, no, but we've recently started working on it after the period of inactivity.

A deep red robe, or a red cloak around medieval clothes with a sword hanging by the side. Depends on what the character does, or is, though the beard gives him a touch of royalty. btw did you get the noble girl?

Lovely painting! Only real criticism - the stars are too bright and sharp compared to the rest of the picture. You should have most of them greyed out at varyng levels. The stars near the horizon would be less visible than the ones above. You can also try the sharpen filter on the whole painting to see if it makes it look better.

When i read that I felt exactly the same - before I realized it was the air conditioning behind me. But its really a lovely painting!

Two more one hour sketches from the past 2 days -

Maybe this will do it for onethinkinggal, girls love dogs


For bruised, one abdomen impaled chick

I love the image as it is! Except for the blurred background which I would have preferred in the same style as the front characters.

Igor, Ratracer, 2ma2 - thanks!

Flippy - the orcy was sort of a joke for someone.

Boyd, good work. Flippy's right, there's clothing on the legs. If you do color the mech try and make it golden as thats how I imagined it!

MrMasse: There's a couple of holes in the globe that lets out her legs. She's straddling the seat, sort of like sitting on a horse.

Everyone else: Thanks, glad you like the sketches! And Gawd no, I wont stop drawing women just cos Trap has some kinda freaky Freudian problem.