Very nice! I like it how it progresses and everything, this is beautiful 
The only thing I might change if I were you would be to balance the volumes of the instruments. But then again I suppose you did this with software, which results in the instruments sounding too blended together unless you have the volumes unbalanced. I always have this problem when I try compose.
Keep up the good work

The only thing I might change if I were you would be to balance the volumes of the instruments. But then again I suppose you did this with software, which results in the instruments sounding too blended together unless you have the volumes unbalanced. I always have this problem when I try compose.
Keep up the good work