QuoteThat is a rather cheap shot. The fact of the matter is that you asked for feedback on your document, in this thread. Several people, myself included, gave feedback. And then you either ignored what we said, or stubbornly claimed we were wrong, without really giving a good reason. That's not a way to improve your document.
I now believe you are not looking for the truth, but only for some kind of personal satisfaction.
You may not have intended it that way, but your document has a rather arrogant ring to it, as if it were the sole truth of the matter. That is a matter of style but you might want to look into that (especially as you have no experience to back you up). If you want to write an authoritative document on any aspect of game design, you will have to look at multiple viewpoints. We have given you alternate viewpoints and you ignore them.
Or, try and write a game yourself, and in doing so, you will find out several fallacies in your document.
And by the way my conscious attention can focus on at least three things simultaneously. Maybe that's just me.
I'm now going to stop this thread before it turns into a flame war. For what it's worth, any document requires proofreading - and if you treat your proofreaders badly, they will leave, and your document will be the worse for it. Caveat emptor.