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#201
Yeah, I was having trouble with the walk cycle, saw the thred and decided to do a paint over... Realy like the style of the character.  Gonns change the style of the backgrounds I think... Damn thats like 2 weeks worth of work wasted... plus the cartooney style will go with my GUIs more too
#202
yes to both, (din't realise the pixle size).... Im finding it very hard to come up with a good looking character to fit the style... The all come out rubish or like this.
#203
Hello, I am currently making a game called Legend of DarkWood; The Orb of Farsight. And as it's my first game I want it to be really good, So I would greatly appreceate your crit on my main character so far...




x2
         


EDIT: changed helm, and breastplate...

x2


paint overs welcome
#204
Critics' Lounge / Re: Crit on DarkWood
Mon 23/01/2006 01:32:04
Hi made the Hanging man swing less, Which is better?

http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/animationwood.zip


*(Also to answer your question MrBen, yes I have made a main character; http://www.adventuregamestudio.co.uk/yabb/index.php?topic=24699.0 )
#205
The Rumpus Room / Re: The MSPaint game
Sat 21/01/2006 17:14:27
if cher aged naturaly



next: If the Wiley Coyote got the Roadrunner
#206
Critics' Lounge / Re: Dark Wood Theme
Sat 21/01/2006 15:09:04
I realy like the drums, The meldoy in the middle is very Medievil-ish but I don't like the into to the middle melody other than that no complaint.

by the way, I'm changing the name to "Legend of DarkWood; The Orb of Farsight"
#207
Critics' Lounge / Re: Crit on DarkWood
Sat 21/01/2006 14:42:54
Hello, Just made the First bit of the Animation (Added hanging man as wel)

quick pic;



x2



http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/flic1.zip

also MrBen is composing the music and sound effects for me, check this out;

http://www.adventuregamestudio.co.uk/yabb/index.php?topic=24641.0

this music is to go with this animation...
#208
You play as a knight in search of the orb of farsight (which gives the holder the power to view anything he desires...

After your castle is raided by bandets, you are sent out by King Feras to find the orb.

Dont want to say too much 'coz of the many twists... But this will be my 1st official game...

Here are some screens...








As you can see from the later pic, the style I'm going for has changed alot... UPDATE soon don't worry...
#209
ok made the firs animation... the bats moving





also made eyes in the bird hole in the bark...


Added path also, thanks seaduck

#210
Changed the pic to the right size and colour depth... has it lost anything yo think?





bit lighter now
what do u think?
#211
sorry if it seems as if we're havin a personal discussion, But we are wanting crit from others as well...
#212
What do you think of this?



started brand new pic made it alot darker
no longer looks like your going for a picnick lol
#213
cool, what is that thing in the bottom right corner?
#214
I personaaly rhink the best way to 'make money' if u where into that (I just enjoy makin the games) then you could release a demo game to get interest, and then a paid for full game...
#215


changed;
1) bricks on caslte
2) sky at top of pic



changed;
1) better shading on trees
2) also added 'leaves'
3) made 1 of the tree tops bigger

Any better? ???

(Also changes them to .png files Thanks.... :))
#216
Critics' Lounge / Crit on DarkWood
Tue 17/01/2006 13:48:21
hi all, Im no artist and was wonderind if you coud give alot of crit on these 2 drawings (this is part of an animation which starts with the sky moves down to this pic;




then a guy on a horse rides through leading to this title screne;



any paintovers verry welcome...


#217
the gif is just 1 image not the whole animation... what do i do?
#218
I have made an animation, but canot post it in the forum, coz I dont know how...
#219
how do u transfer an animation into a disscussion?
#220
Critics' Lounge / Intro cutscene
Sat 14/01/2006 08:00:25
Hi all, yay, I can do cutscene's without havng to go to different roomd per frame... OK I have a cutscene in my game and wanted some crit, but I dont know how to show you... please help!
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