You know what I think the rea problem is, at least for my eyes? It's that this noodle restaurant looks like it should be inside. I'm not really sure exactly why, but it just doesn't look like an outside kinna place.
I think part of it might be the foreground, actually. It looks more like clutter than buildings-across-the-street. The framing makes it feel like we're looking in a window. And the sidewalk blocks aren't quite big enough; they look more like floortiles, and since the road isn't visible because of the foreground clutter, it's hard to know that is a road.
And then there's the background. There's a street on the left with only one building and then a big black space where another building might be. Kinna confusing.
The checkerboard isn't just distracting, it's confusing. I have no idea what that's supposed to be, and it appears to serve no function. So one might spend way more time than necessary looking at that since it also draws the eye...
I think the barstools are also a problem. Most outdoor places I know have chairs that can be brought inside out of the rain. Of course, I live in Seattle, so...
I guess I can just sum this up by saying "too confusing". I spent the first minute looking at the picture thinking, "What am I seeing?" and "What's that supposed to be?". I think you need to simplify.
I think part of it might be the foreground, actually. It looks more like clutter than buildings-across-the-street. The framing makes it feel like we're looking in a window. And the sidewalk blocks aren't quite big enough; they look more like floortiles, and since the road isn't visible because of the foreground clutter, it's hard to know that is a road.
And then there's the background. There's a street on the left with only one building and then a big black space where another building might be. Kinna confusing.
The checkerboard isn't just distracting, it's confusing. I have no idea what that's supposed to be, and it appears to serve no function. So one might spend way more time than necessary looking at that since it also draws the eye...
I think the barstools are also a problem. Most outdoor places I know have chairs that can be brought inside out of the rain. Of course, I live in Seattle, so...
I guess I can just sum this up by saying "too confusing". I spent the first minute looking at the picture thinking, "What am I seeing?" and "What's that supposed to be?". I think you need to simplify.