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jsut so i can make sure it is allright
just .... alright
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I fact, I have been playing it for a while, and I still, occasionally, get stuck.
change to "In fact,"
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but we don’t get paid do make them, so they are not going to be the best.
I disagree with that... just because a game has a large budget to spend, doesn't mean that the game will automatically be great.
Because we don't get paid to do them, we can make them at our own pace, and we don't have someone curbing our inspiration, stlye and direction.
Other than that, I'd say its fairly decent, and go ahead and send it. Although, I'd stay away from phrases like "I reckon"
jsut so i can make sure it is allright
just .... alright

Paragraph 2:
I fact, I have been playing it for a while, and I still, occasionally, get stuck.
change to "In fact,"
Paragraph 4:
but we don’t get paid do make them, so they are not going to be the best.
I disagree with that... just because a game has a large budget to spend, doesn't mean that the game will automatically be great.
Because we don't get paid to do them, we can make them at our own pace, and we don't have someone curbing our inspiration, stlye and direction.
Other than that, I'd say its fairly decent, and go ahead and send it. Although, I'd stay away from phrases like "I reckon"