Looking amazing, as usual, Dan. I thought that I'd just take a bit of a look at the lighting as well, since you seem to have the rest of it largely under control.
The big lighting issue I see in this particular corner of the island is that with the large halo of light around the lantern, it makes this area look somewhat foggy, which I really hadn't seen in the other backgrounds you've posted, including the rough of the same background. Haddas' edit, though perhaps a little more contrasty than I think is particularly necessary, does help to give the background a somewhat less misty, etherial look. Now, if you're going for that look, I'd suggest having a little fog or something of the sort at ground level, perhaps coming from the Bass pond area.
And indeed, it does remind one of Melee Island, which is a good thing. It's consistent, and assuming that we'll be seeing daylight once the story progresses past this first chapter, it's a good way to start. Lovely.
The big lighting issue I see in this particular corner of the island is that with the large halo of light around the lantern, it makes this area look somewhat foggy, which I really hadn't seen in the other backgrounds you've posted, including the rough of the same background. Haddas' edit, though perhaps a little more contrasty than I think is particularly necessary, does help to give the background a somewhat less misty, etherial look. Now, if you're going for that look, I'd suggest having a little fog or something of the sort at ground level, perhaps coming from the Bass pond area.
And indeed, it does remind one of Melee Island, which is a good thing. It's consistent, and assuming that we'll be seeing daylight once the story progresses past this first chapter, it's a good way to start. Lovely.