Actually, I think the face could work, it just tends to look off because the features are pushed to extremes. Keep facial proportions in mind (such as eyes recommended to be roughly halfway down the head), and I think a more natural look will fall into place.
The hairstyle works, but I do get a bit confused about the length. With it so close to the head and no differentiation between bangs and sides it gives me the impression of long hair tied back in a ponytail, except that the front seems to have bangs that go below the chin and cover the eye.
overall style aside, it seems it should come out from the head a little bit, but I can see where that'd be difficult with so few pixels. Hopefully one of our pixel-deities will come around and poke some dots around.
The hairstyle works, but I do get a bit confused about the length. With it so close to the head and no differentiation between bangs and sides it gives me the impression of long hair tied back in a ponytail, except that the front seems to have bangs that go below the chin and cover the eye.
overall style aside, it seems it should come out from the head a little bit, but I can see where that'd be difficult with so few pixels. Hopefully one of our pixel-deities will come around and poke some dots around.