Nice tune. Reminds me of those awful pan-flute covers they make of old hit songs... But not in a bad way. In fact there have been suggestions about taking the drums out and adding a violin. You know what I would do if I were you? Add a second melody or a back up melody right there where the drumming starts - with a violin. The violin could, as I said, play a different melody, or play the same, dunno which would be better. And I'd like to hear the tune in whole. hope you're not leaving it a 1:44 piece, seems to end a bit too soon...
But... as said, I wouldn't go removing the drums.
But... as said, I wouldn't go removing the drums.