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I think the hat looks weird like that. You should do it like RocketBoy did and make the hat come on top of the eyes or like that. Besides, what use is it if it's like that?

On the chair closer to the door, the backrest shouldn't have that light. It doesn't look straight like that.

He looks like he's dancing in the walkcycle. If he's supposed to walk that fast, then make the steps longer, otherwise at least make it slower...

(Edit): Oh wait, the two walkcycles are different. The smaller one has a weird pause in there.

Oh, and I just realized, if he's not supposed to walk so fast, lessen the elbows' jumping. He should keep them more relaxed and loose if he's walking casually...

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yes you use the wood the gym guy cut, put it in the shoe making machine (in the clothes store)

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I thought I had tried that  :

Everyone gets stuck at the easy parts. There's no advice on what I need Ã, . I

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don't know how to make clogs. I won the other constests, and I've thought about using the wood the gym guy cut, but don't know what to do with it, if that's the case.

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Hmm...

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Can't get the water running. Apparently I have to use something drastic. (I was thinking landmines, but can't do anything to them... Or would I have to use the gas?)

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He looks very angry, and a bit in a hangover, at least from his eyes...

Way too empty, and in my opinion also too big. It doesn't even have chairs. And if it's supposed to be a detective's office, it really shouldn't be that big. So make the room smaller (or all the items bigger, or maybe actually both, at least with for example the bookshelf) and put more in.

Wow, looks quite professional. Maybe the story isn't of the favorite theme of mine, but it just looks so well done, I'm waiting for this. With excitement  .

I find it interesting that you named the thread "Ho Hope"...

I agree, the third is the one i like less...actually the sky is completely covered...do you think i should add some clouds effect?

Well, I'm not sure if you edited it but, there's this dark area in the middle, that looks like a spot where there isn't any clouds, while on the more purple areas there seem to be stars... I'd say either add a bit more detail (don't overdo it though, they're excellent now that they aren't perfectly visible) or then put some stars on the dark are, since it looks like there's an opening in the clouds there.

The third isn't bad at all, it's just that if you're going to use them in the same game, won't you have to use a different character art for the third, since it's from above...?

I think he could have a portable excavator with lasers attached to it...

I'm not sure if there really are that many hills in there, but I don't think that's much of a problem 

Wow, they're really great... I don't see much lack of detail in them. I guess the third background could have a bit of stars showing, as it doesn't seem to have clouds in that one area.

Well, it looks quite good (maybe a few perspective problems ). The only thing that bugs me is that you use the default cursors... They just don't fit. I wouldn't use them in almost any game, especially one with graphics like these.

I think so too...

Also, I'm not sure if you intended it, but in the same pic (#3) the legs are way too long...

Well, it has some nice features, but is pretty repetitive and has some odd parts, for example a few same notes too many in a row (especially with the main instrument they sound like the song's jammed in the same part). The main instrument doesn't work well, the sound at the beginning of each note makes them too separate (and creates the repetition I mentioned)...

But it's still got some pretty good stuff in it. Just a bit more experience...

Eh, in my opinion the shadows seem to go a bit wrong way, as the sky's colors don't suggest that the sun is actually in that direction. I hope you get what I mean... But that's not a huge problem.

The thing that really bugs me is that his elbow is almost at the point of his wrist...

Do you realize he's standing on his toes in the back view? 

Check the difference with yours and ProgZmax's edit...

Don't ask...


Hmm... That looks like Teal'c from Stargate (or Stargåte)...

Okay then, next: 'Knights in white satin'