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Hello again! You might or might not have seen my first attempt (It's located HERE).
I decided to try something different this time, a portrait (using a picture as a reference, of course).

I kinda like where this is going, but i'm having a few problems
*Can't get the teeth right
*The general feel of the face is kind of... funny
*I'm not sure how to shade the intersection of the face with the hair
*Haven't even began to shade the hair... It seems rather difficult

ORIGINAL:


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Well, any comments/critics/suggestions/paintovers are greatly appreciated by this newcomer.
Thanks for your time!

PS: Yes, the drawing kinda suck 

I'm sure you guys read that thread title quite a lot.
Back to the point, i registered yesterday (i think) and i did my first character about 40 minutes ago (and my first try at pixel art).


Yep, it kinda sucks.

A few point to consider
*It's kind of a rush work since i just wanted to post it and go to sleep
*I'm not sure i exported it from PS properly, since some shading pixels seem to have dissapeared....
*I was going to eliminate the black outline, but it started looking funny so i left it as it is.
*Didn't quite have time to finish the "shoes" (it shows, right?).

Anyways, any makeovers/critics/general pointers you might want to do, plese, go ahead and do them!

I'm off to sleep now. Don't go to harsh on my first little guy.