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it's good, but i'd get someone else to sing it. the person singing sounds flat and out of tune in alot of places. Take this as GOOD advice. im a performing arts student, i know alot about this kinda stuff.

i'm guessing this is background music for a room? it's a good MIDI but i need more info as to wat's happening at the time or wat kind of room it's for to judge if it may fit.

I think the door's a bit small relative to the character, though.

true, but the character will be smaller in game, i just pasted the guy on the pic to give ppl an idea of what it's goin to look like. good eye for detail tho, no one else noticed 

thanks for the replys. i think i'll just let you all know that this background is for the opening cutscene and will only be shown for way less than a minute. fine details don't matter too much (not at the moment anyway.)

here's a concept drawing for a character.



heres the character in the cell:

ye but which do you think looks better? the one with the padded door, or the one with the metal door?

an update

hi. please tell me what you think of this background.

i think i will have a go at this. but err....well I'm a bit of a n00b, where do i post my game when it is finished and I'm ready to enter it into the competition?

EDIT. Lol doesn't matter dint see the bit at the end of first post. lol

sorry to post about this so long after my previous post but what (in your opinion) is the best vector drawing programme and is it downloadable (im looking for something thats free) or do i have to buy one from a shop.

what programme did you use to draw this?  when i draw something i never get smooth edges like that :o

in the accident he only forgets who he is, not so much what he's done in the past.

heres a brief outline of the game:

opening sequence: a flashback of somesort of accident from a 'dissoriented veiw'.  he wakes up in a mentle asylum- he is being released and told his name is ****** (not sure what yet). anyway, long story short- he was a MIB agent but was involved in an accident that wiped out his memory of who he is and that he works for the MIB- but he does remember everything during his time working for MIB. The MIB think he will be dangerous and may expose them to the world. he is then put into a mentle institute where they make him believe that he has been dilusional. once out in the real world, he gets flash backs and things start to jog his memory and starts to wonder if he is who he's been told he is.

it wasn't so much a typo just my bad spelling abillities.. but which version do you prefer? (ignoring the 'typo' on the first)

heres a couple more versions with spelling corrections  ( thnx pslim )

heres the title screen for a game im starting concept art for:



feel free to do paintovers and stuff -  just dont copy this for use in your games