Thanks a lot, I see I was right to post in the beginners forum.

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At the end of the day, you may like “Abducted: 10 minutes†only if you really like the plot, or if you are masochistic.
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I've completed it. I used some hints from the forum but I didn't use the walkthrough.
Btw, I completed the game, but I got only 87 points ^^.
QuoteI know you don't want c&c on the sketch, but I'm not too keen on it, if the lineart doesn't work, neither will the coloured sketch.
QuoteAnyhoo. The lines don't "flow". Do a few gesture drawings (quick drawings meant to capture the movement, pose, and rhythm of a subject) and you will surely improve in that aspect.
QuoteMoving on to the colouring, I suppose you could go for a Shane Glines-ish approach, which appears (to me) to suit your style, and is generally just rock awesome.
QuoteThe coloured edges seem too angular, some are anti-aliased and some are not, wich creates incosistency.
QuoteMy suggestion is to a) improve the sketch, it has potential.
b) study some of Shanes art, if this is the style you are trying to achieve, and c) try using the pen tool instead of the lasso tool for this kind of colouring, with no outlines.
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