The shading is definitely better, but still a bit too subtle in my opinion. There is really no need to be afraid of darker shades.
The face still looks cartoonish. The main reason is the white in her eyes. In German there is a saying that you have to be really close to see someones "White in the Eyes". White means you are either very close to the persons face or the character is afraid of something.
Two pictures of Heidi Klum (you could also look at Seal if you like to
) to illustrate my point:

In the second picture there is almost no white left even though we are still pretty close and even in the first picture the dominant color of her eyes is not white.
The face still looks cartoonish. The main reason is the white in her eyes. In German there is a saying that you have to be really close to see someones "White in the Eyes". White means you are either very close to the persons face or the character is afraid of something.
Two pictures of Heidi Klum (you could also look at Seal if you like to



In the second picture there is almost no white left even though we are still pretty close and even in the first picture the dominant color of her eyes is not white.