Hi, working on a run-down/dingy office type BG for my very (very!) first one-room adventure, and I'm not happy with my attempts at shading/highlighting, and general detailing. Wondering if any of you helpful arty types can give me any pointers?
The window is supposed to be cracked/broken, and with slats nailed up outside. The drippy stuff underneath is supposed to indicate damp. The desk is supposed to be rickety as hell, and propped up with books. I'm planning to add some foreground detail to help put that impression across, but I wanted to try and get the basic room layout sorted and, most importantly, shaded.
I'm happy with the perspective and the drawing itself, although, again, there are a fair few details (objects and the like - computers, a pot plant, a phone, etc) to be added.
Original 320x200:

x2 magnification:

Paintovers/additions are more than welcome, and any help is much appreciated.
Thanks.
Edit: Changed images to .PNGs - sorry about that.
The window is supposed to be cracked/broken, and with slats nailed up outside. The drippy stuff underneath is supposed to indicate damp. The desk is supposed to be rickety as hell, and propped up with books. I'm planning to add some foreground detail to help put that impression across, but I wanted to try and get the basic room layout sorted and, most importantly, shaded.
I'm happy with the perspective and the drawing itself, although, again, there are a fair few details (objects and the like - computers, a pot plant, a phone, etc) to be added.
Original 320x200:

x2 magnification:

Paintovers/additions are more than welcome, and any help is much appreciated.
Thanks.
Edit: Changed images to .PNGs - sorry about that.