Looks good, here are a few crits:
* The ground looks *very* hot, so I would expect a lot of steam where it meets the water.
* Also, think about how heat distorts or ripplesÃ, perspective in the desert, maybe you could use a similar effect.Ã,Â
* The rock in the foreground needs better texturing.
*The edges of the pillars and tower look too sharp - give them some bevel - bump mapping can only take you so far. Right now, the erosion on the pillars seems strangely selective, not affecting their outlines at all, only their surfaces.
*How about giving the floating spheres a halo of sorts, or something to make them more magical looking?
*Perhaps give the sky another color?
* It's not good that the POV leaves you speculating whether you're in the water or standing on molten rock
That said, I think it's an interesting picture that raises some questions and makes we want to explore. More details would help, though. Also, the text effect is very good imo.
* The ground looks *very* hot, so I would expect a lot of steam where it meets the water.
* Also, think about how heat distorts or ripplesÃ, perspective in the desert, maybe you could use a similar effect.Ã,Â
* The rock in the foreground needs better texturing.
*The edges of the pillars and tower look too sharp - give them some bevel - bump mapping can only take you so far. Right now, the erosion on the pillars seems strangely selective, not affecting their outlines at all, only their surfaces.
*How about giving the floating spheres a halo of sorts, or something to make them more magical looking?
*Perhaps give the sky another color?
* It's not good that the POV leaves you speculating whether you're in the water or standing on molten rock

That said, I think it's an interesting picture that raises some questions and makes we want to explore. More details would help, though. Also, the text effect is very good imo.