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A quick one... So it's tryen' to be an abandoned house. But it didn't turn out exactly as I planned...

[Sektor 13]

Best idea: Sektor 13
Best design: Lilbluesmurf
Best Funcionality: Sektor 13
Best technique: Sektor 13

And you may add:
*sand
*bushes & other plants
*maybe some texture for the grass?
*and the same on the water
*and what about a sun?

And the sky color was way too dark before, but zyndikate already fixed that on the paintover.

Like the bg, really nice style you got there.
The only thing that I would really improve is the perspective of the bricks. They don't really look like the the building is round-shaped...
I would make a paintover, but I think i would probably ruin your nice style... But I made a red-lines example how the bricks should be.


Er... it's not the best, the lines aren't still quite exactly in perspective, but I hope it helps.

Thanks!
Even I thought this was finished too... But, heh, changes can still make it better.Ã, 

So I:
*tilted the hat a little bit (didn't reverse it cause InCreator said they never wear hat reversed)
*made the jacket a number larger
*did the same with the shirt


2x:

Ok, I changed the pants. Also did some other minor changes you probably won't notice.

Here:


And 2x:


I think it's much better now, what do you think?

Ah well.

According to what all of you said and InCreator's pm I changed the gangsta like that:



2x:


What do you think now?

Tuomas: Yeah, he's supposed to be leaning to the wall.

Big Bro: Yes, I tried to do some googling, but most of the gangstas are in shape with big muscles etc. but I - forgot to say - wanted to make this gang like more "wannabe"-ish; so like the members are mostly thin or fat.

Vict0r: Yeah now I notice it too. He really does...look...weird Gotta change his eyes.

Mr. Crow: True it is, bandana would fit perfectly!

Well... the gang's like... crime, guns, tuning, hiphop music, drinking, stuff like that.

And the gang operates in abandoned ghetto place in an abandoned soap-factory.

This character is supposed to be a member of a street gang (guns, tuning, hiphop...)
So he needs that kind of attitude. I'm not really that type of person, so I'm stuck. What should I do?
How can I make him have an 'attitude'?

Here he is:


And 2X:

The worst disaster ever...
Me forgetting to save the changes for my game!



Next: KoRn (the band ) on a world tour

A double-post...

...and many changes on the bg.



Changed:
*added some trash (which I think sucks)
*changed the windows
*took off the ugly blur on the city skyline
*added a streetlight (which I think sucks, too
*...and much more stuff

Oh.. and I tried to move the car-wreck, but it didn't look good, cause it wasn't that much in perspective anymore (I then would have have to redraw the whole car.

So, overall... I think it IS better that before, but some stuff was better before... Anyways what do you think?

A slice of salami on a world tour...



NEXT: Fast and furious fruits

(The only Shakespeare's play I know is Hamlet)


Next: KoRn on a world tour

Heh, yeah, almost like "Dude where's my car",
the only differences are that there's only one guy lookin for the car, and he's not able to get home.
But the storyline is pretty similar...
(Oh NO I gotta change it a little bit or they'd call me a copycat!)

Actually I've already tried to add some ears it the front view, but it didn't look very good... like... an elephant (?) or somethin like that... (ears seemed too big)

Yes, I'll consider that if I get stuck with the puzzle.

Btw I almost forgot: The game will be in two languages -- Estonian and English (I'll translate it when I complete the game)

Good news! The game is progressing fast at the moment. The story is almost complete (in my head), I only need to make up one puzzle.
And I've made many bg-s too.

And the release date may be even earlier, about in the middle of the spring or something like that.

Thanks for all the crits and advice.

What you said is true. Adding details and stuff would make it better.

I'm working on it.

So it's a bg of an abandoned city area with a car-wreck.

The problem is, that it looks way too empty. I'm not sure what to do with so many plain, empty areas. And overall I don't like it (can't say why, it just feels so)
So it needs serious changes.
What to do?

So I'd aprecciate to get some help and advice.



Thanks,
-gameboy