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Looks good, I can see the resemblance.  I think the arm could be a little thicker in the front view, and the hand in the side view could be a little smaller.  The hair in the side view could use some shading as well, but I think it looks really nice overall.

I didn't notice how unnatual the pose was until I saw that edit, thanks kaaZ.Ã,  Especially the right hip.

I like what you've done with the upper body as well, loominous, looks like i'll be doing some more edits.

Thanks for the feedback.

Edit :  Made quite a few more changes...  Think this will be pretty close to final.

Made some more changes... made it closer to Farlander's edit 'cause it was really great.Ã,  Think there's more room for improvement with the hands and the left leg, so i'll keep working on it.

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Thanks for the comments everyone.

Excellent edits, Farlander... I really like what you've done with the eyes.Ã,  I'll see if I can get some of your edits into the final, 'cause they're a big help.

I tried some changes last night, but the sprite doesn't seem to match the SQ theme so i'll keep trying...

Thanks again.Ã,  I'll try and get some work done on it today.

Made quite a few changes... fixed the eyes and hair, changed the outlines, added a few new things.Ã,  I like this version much better.Ã,  Looks more like the SQ5 sprite.

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Still, I think the fists don't look quite right... he's supposed to have them on his hips, but it looks like he's flexing... any suggestions on fixing that?

Thanks for the feedback guys. 

Farlander: Thanks for the detailed suggestions, I think they'll be a big help.  I'll remember to post gifs next time.

Think i'll focus on Roger for now...

Thought there would be a cool story to tell in between SQ5 and 6, so I whipped these up today as a test.

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Any comments/crits?Ã,  Thanks in advance.