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Show posts MenuQuote from: Petteri on Wed 07/07/2004 21:25:15Ok, I fixed all the typos if you notice anymore that are worth changing please tell
Well, the story sounds really interesting and your character doesn't look too bad, but your writing is annoying to read. I suggest you edit your post with correct use of commas and dots, and also write words as they should be, 'b4', 'becuz' etc. is just annoying.
Other than that, welcome, and hope you'll finish this project.
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