Looks way better.
The only thing that stands out to me now is the large contrast in shadow between the corner base of the building and the sidewalk. Also, the sidewalk has lines separating the blocks on the edges, but on the top it's all one piece -- I thinkit needs to be cut up following the lines you started.
The only thing that stands out to me now is the large contrast in shadow between the corner base of the building and the sidewalk. Also, the sidewalk has lines separating the blocks on the edges, but on the top it's all one piece -- I thinkit needs to be cut up following the lines you started.