If you want it to look more scummy, you should probably add a little more scum.
Details like chewing gum on the road, scratches or grafitti on the wall or anything else you can think of can make all the difference.
I think a lot of the lines need to be sharper as well, i think that would pick the image up a bit.
Also, you can upload bmps to 2dadventure, but they won't display here. Add a link to it, however, & I'm sure some people will click to look at it
.
Details like chewing gum on the road, scratches or grafitti on the wall or anything else you can think of can make all the difference.
I think a lot of the lines need to be sharper as well, i think that would pick the image up a bit.
Also, you can upload bmps to 2dadventure, but they won't display here. Add a link to it, however, & I'm sure some people will click to look at it
