Chasing Dr. Esr

Started by Ogon, Fri 24/03/2006 21:01:43

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Ogon

I've started to develope a German - I'll try it in English now - adventure (screen resolution 320x240, I hope it will be a medium length game) - I want to translate it in English later, but I will need some helpers ;)

Story:

One day, Gedon wakes up in a hospital. He can't remember anything. The police are able to find out who he is (his name and where he lives and so on), but they don't know what's happened with Gedon: His skin is blue and his behaviour is sometimes a bit strange. Gedon must find the information about the things that happened by himself!

Screenshots:









Homepage:
http://www.chasing-doctor-esr.at.gg/

Progress:
Graphics: 5 %
Story: 40 %
Dialogs: 2 %
Scripting: 5 %

Diary:

march 25, 2006
+Added speech portrait of the main character to see what it looks like with speech portraits
march 26, 2006
+Added an English version of the homepage
march 27, 2006
+Finished walk animations for main character (4 frames, 4 directions - could be better, but I'm content with that)
march 28, 2006
+Corrected some things of the main character graphics
+changed webspace in cause of long downtimes of the old one
march 29, 2006
+remade intro-background
+refreshed the screenshots

Mr Flibble

This game looks very interesting! I like the graphics as well.

I hope you can get an English translator (by the way, your English is fine, don't worry about it).
Ah! There is no emoticon for what I'm feeling!

Ogon

#2
But I don't want to have mistakes in the English translation of my game. And I'm sure if I wrote it, there would be more than one mistake....

thank you for your motivating answer! :)

EDIT: corrected something...

Sinitrena

I've seen a lot of games with not so good english, and it never stopped me from playing.
My english isn't perfect either, and I make my games in english anyways.

Is this snow in your first screen? This one looks a bit empty, in my opinion.

Good luck with your game.

Ogon

Yes, it's snow in the first picture. I know it is a bit empty, but when I drew it I didn't know what to add... it's a screen from the introduction and it happens nearly nothing in this screen, so I don't need much objects there ;D

Hammerite

you probably wont have mistakes  when translating. your english is actually very close to perfect.
i used to be indeceisive but now im not so sure!

Steel Drummer

neat graphics- simple but interesting. I wonder how good the storyline is...
I'm composing the music for this game:



Ogon

I'm still working out that...

I'm sure about three or four rooms, but what will follow after that? I'm imaging more than one possiblity, and I have to chose one of them...

Ogon

I added some new screenshots

EDIT: the pictures which are taken from the running game have the gui at the bottom

splat44

BlueDeath,

Those are great graphics.

I do see in 2nd screenshot the half of blue guy is missing.

You might want changing that.

Good luck

ManicMatt

Are you kidding me? The blue guy is hiding in the bushes! Although it looks more like grass.Ã,  :-\ Which might explain your confusion.

This looks nice, and despite the old cliche of a guy waking up with no memory, the fact that he's blue makes it all the more intriging!

Look, it's the blue guy's teddy bear!


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