The Legacy of Taft (Webpage info and more!)

Started by deadsuperhero, Sat 11/12/2004 20:22:57

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deadsuperhero

Okay, this is a really weird game I'm making. It's about William Howard Taft's family is abducted by aliens. The aliens threaten to eat Taft's family for dinner, and Taft says he doesn't care. The aliens are impressed, and send TAft into the future instead of eating him. This game has voices, sprites everything...except right now all I made was a short preview. Here's the link:
http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/TaftDemov0.2.zip
Some screenshots:

the picture above is a crappy UFO

This picture is just a really long road used in the demo.
Tell me what you think!
NewsFlash: You can also post what you think in the games section. Just search for Taft, and post your idea of it.
UPDATE!!! Added better text box and Alec's voice. New text, and translations
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Problem

The story is weird, but might work. To be honest, I didn't like what I saw. The screenshots are too blurry, you can only guess what they show. And the demo actually didn't have anything to show, except of that horrible speech (Oh, how I love reading text compared to this). By the way, did you draw the character close-up yourself? It looks very good, but doesn't match the style of your backgriound at all, so I hardly believe this is your work. Correct me if I'm wrong.
Anyway, good luck with your game. I hope you will be able to improve your graphics and make up an interesting story.

deadsuperhero

Quote from: Problem on Sun 12/12/2004 18:54:53
The story is weird, but might work. To be honest, I didn't like what I saw. The screenshots are too blurry, you can only guess what they show. And the demo actually didn't have anything to show, except of that horrible speech (Oh, how I love reading text compared to this). By the way, did you draw the character close-up yourself? It looks very good, but doesn't match the style of your backgriound at all, so I hardly believe this is your work. Correct me if I'm wrong.
Anyway, good luck with your game. I hope you will be able to improve your graphics and make up an interesting story.
It really is my work. I suck at drawing backgrounds, so I just used some concepts until I get a bg artist. You didn't think the speech was funny? Okay, Taft's voice is supposed to be stupid on purpose, but it was a pretty funny preview. Don't worry, I'll modify it a bit.
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Blackthorne

I thought it was funny.  I laughed.

The backgrounds aren't GREAT, but it seems funny enough.  Besides, you got tons of time to work on it.

Bt
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Problem

Quote from: Webspider on Sun 12/12/2004 20:03:32
It really is my work. I suck at drawing backgrounds, so I just used some concepts until I get a bg artist. You didn't think the speech was funny? Okay, Taft's voice is supposed to be stupid on purpose, but it was a pretty funny preview. Don't worry, I'll modify it a bit.

No need to modify it, if you like it the way it is. This was just my opinion. The demo didn't give me an impression of what the game will be like, so it may work very well in the end. If you make a funny game with good puzzles and story, noone will mind the graphics. And if I don't like the speech, I can just turn it off, so that wouldn't be a problem  ;)
It's strange that you have problems with your backgrounds, because that character really looks good.

Moneo

well i've seen a lot worse, and speech is hardly ever included so kudos to you for putting it in.

keep it up!

fg2hk

Great Job! ;)Ã,  Ã, That was hilarious.Ã,  I can't wait for this game to come out.Ã,  It sounds really cool.

deadsuperhero

Well, I've been working on it. The text box is better, the narrorator sounds alot better (thanks to Alec Whitechurch) and there are two translations. German...and Blablian (a language that just repeats "Blah blah blah" a whole bunch of times)
I'll post a link to it soon.
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[Cameron]

Wooh! Go team me!  ;D
Anyway, I'll be happy to do any more voices you need. Looks like a pretty cool game.
Regards,

Alec

deadsuperhero

Anytime, Alec. You're voice was great for the narrorator. Quite funny.
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Gamer

Dude! Sweet game! I like the update. How'd you make that talking sprite?

deadsuperhero

Quote from: Gamer on Sun 19/12/2004 00:52:05
Dude! Sweet game! I like the update. How'd you make that talking sprite?
I looked on google for a pic of Taft in B&W, chose one that I liked, then touched it up in Photoshop using a low opacity brush. I then animated it by drawing his mouth movements BY HAND. After a few hours, it was done, and I was happy with it.
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Developer

Looking good. You might want to put more details into your backgrounds.

deadsuperhero

Quote from: Developer on Sun 19/12/2004 15:26:54
Looking good. You might want to put more details into your backgrounds.
Well, I'm not very good at bgs, but if you want to be an artist for the game, all you have to do is ask.
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Problem

Who did the german translation? Sorry to say that, but it's horrible. Most of it doesn't make any sense.

deadsuperhero

Quote from: Problem on Wed 22/12/2004 17:54:44
Who did the german translation? Sorry to say that, but it's horrible. Most of it doesn't make any sense.
Sorry. I tried using a translation service, but obviously it didn't work. Didn't notice that, seeing as I speak very little German.
The Blahblian is better, except for the fact that it changes back to English in the second room. I'm going to work on that. (As well as the actual game)
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DemoKRAT

Dude, I think your game is horrible. The voices suck, the humor sucks, everything sucks.
I think you're a retard, your game is so stupid.

deadsuperhero

Quote from: DemoKRAT on Wed 22/12/2004 22:05:54
Dude, I think your game is horrible. The voices suck, the humor sucks, everything sucks.
I think you're a retard, your game is so stupid.
That's not very nice. I can understand if the translation pack is bad, maybe even the backgrounds aren't so great. But the WHOLE GAME??? It looks like someone *COUGH*DemoKRAT*COUGH* didn't read the rules.
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Gamer

DemoKRAT, you need t olearn to respect other people. I liked the game personally. First off: Why do you think it sucks?

DemoKRAT

Well...I didn't think it was funny, I didn't like the graphics, and I hated the sound. It wasn't even funny with the Mentos song.

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