A big apartment

[José Luiz]

After getting courage, I finally decided to post something in Critics Lounge.

This is the entrance hall of a big apartment:


(320x200; VP: 247,51)

What do you think?
How can I improve it?

(The GUI from FoA is just to complete the background. If I eventually make a game with it, I'll create a GUI too.)

[Nacho]

ATM, quite good, but the change pixels size for resizing the lamp is not very pleasing... and for my taste, the sofa should be shorter. The perspective of the table at the end of the room should be the opposite! But quite pleasing overall... More improvements would need maybe a more deep teach. 

[pslim]

I really like the style a lot. Just three minor suggestions (and Farlander's comment about the perspective on the table is seconded):

The yellow looks great, but the orange doesn't look great (to me) with it. I would suggest making the sofa and chair quite a bit darker, if they must remain orange.

I think the minimalist shading on the walls is very effective, but you haven't done the same to the other objects, so they look slightly out of place. This is particularly true of the sofa, probably just because it's big. Maybe you could shade the sofa the way you've shaded the trim on the walls (make the top parts brighter, lower parts darker, etc)?

The details on the desk against the right wall are almost impossible to see at 1x zoom. It looks like maybe there is some shading variation in the color of the panels that make it up, but it's hard to tell. I would recommend upping the contrast there until the shape is obvious even at 100% zoom.

[José Luiz]

Thank you very much for your replies! I was going to write before, but I couldn't.

I tried to make the changes you suggested. I don't know if I made them properly...


(320x200; VP: 247,51)

- The perspective of the little table was fixed.
- The lamps were changed (but I still don't like them...).
- The sofa and the chair are in a different color;
- The desk on the right is in different colors and with a few more details.

I'll continue trying to improve it!
I also intend to post other rooms of the apartment - although it will take some time.