A song i've made (thrashmetal)

[Mouth for war]

hi! just wanted to share two of our songs with you metalheads I hope you'll like it. Oh the first song hasn't been mixed yet by the way if you have any comments about the sound...the other is just roughly mixed...not the final version

http://www.myspace.com/bestdeformed

[Jens]

well done, considering the genre. do i hear some dissection-influences (black horizons)?
assaults really well mixed, you've got that sound.

[Mazoliin]

Oh the envy. I've myself tried to make some thrash and it always ends up being crap :
But you guys got it. I like it, gives me a sort of Cryptic Slaughter feeling (although more metal).

Näven i vädret och rakt in i moshen!

[Mouth for war]

Näven i vädret och rakt in i moshen!

Ja för fan!!!

[Questionable]

It feels like the guitar is just looping. The best thrash metal i've heard doesn't sound like the same melody over and over.

The drums are good, they're like a machine driving into you. The singer has it down decent for thrash, he could use more range in his "singing." Otherwise it starts to sound like someone pissed that their dog pissed on the carpet instead of someone trying to express themself.

The only real thing that doesn't make this feel like a song for me is the lack of variation in the guitar. (Interestingly the second song doesn't suffer from this is much, but it's still just the same riff over and over.)

[Mouth for war]

well we can't all think the same hehe...but i don't think it´s that repetitive...only the verse and chorus...thanks for your opinions...more stuff will be added soon

[Mouth for war]

Added the first song we wrote, recorded entirely in my old apartment. The neighbours were sooo happy

[Mazoliin]

I can imagine

This shit truly kick ass!

[The Awesome]

Let's see...

Stupidly fast tempo...check
brutal guitar riffage...check
can't understand what the singer is saying...check check!!

All the elements needed for a totally brutal metal band!! Hell yeah!!!