Darn! My first sprite ...

[Loki]

Hi everyone!

This is my first sprite. It took me about one and a half hour to complete it. I'm not very good in anything, but i tried to get the shadows right. I hope it's ok. The "dither technique" made me shit bricks and it even didn't become good.

Whatever ... here it is! Own me!

Captain Ølbaerg



Greetz
Loki

[Renal Shutdown]

The trousers could do with some more shading.
The hats a bit jaunty.
The belt looks flat.
The boot is puzzling, feet are a nightmare to pixel.

Aside from that, I can't see anything that needs improving.  For a first attempt, I'm pleasantly surprised.

[big brother]

I would suggest:

- Add more contrast to your colors (mostly the jacket/pants ensemble, they look too similar in hue)
- Lose the dither (it will make animation easier, plus it'll help it look like cloth, not fur)

[Loki]

Thanks for the comments so far. I'll try to think of the facts next time. But i'm surprised, that there were only two replies. 

I'll come up with a new one this week... if you have any other improvements, then let me know it.

greetz
loki