Backgrounds for Lost In The Nightmare- 2nd of August 2007

[DutchMarco]

hi,

just some wel-intended c&c from me:
improve on your English, or have it proofread by someone on this forum. some of the sentences you used are rather awkward.

i'd go with story 2 / b, it draws the player into the nightmare more. Since the player could also have been killed. They're his friends that died. This makes the story more personal  and thus scarier.

In so frar as I've seen some of your bgs, I think they're cool. having a 3Dwffect instead of 2d handdrawn, is a nice change. Both styles are nice of course, but seeing the 3d style makes for a nice change.

keep it up!

[radiowaves]

Everything looks coming up well.

One suggestion though. On large open areas, I suggest you make a one sided treeline, no need of branches or anything like that, just a flat 2D laid out as a fence in the horizon to lose the sharp groundline. You know the type of tree fence like they used in older ralley games and in train simulators.
It would be handy for a place like this: