Blip And Radar Progress Thread

Nikolas · Fri 23/02/2007 16:52:46

NOOoooooooow I get it!

Yup the pacman one is cool! I'm actually laughing now! The first one needs 1 additional panel to work, as tuomas indicated.

Both are inthe right direction!

Additionally I'm glad to see you making so much progress and not abondoning something, for probably one of the first times, which makes me ultra happy!

Sam. · Fri 23/02/2007 19:56:25

I hope this is taken as it is intended, none of these comics are funny. I haven't laughed or even smiled after reading any of them. The jokes are either too convoluted to make sense or they are tired internet cliches. As far as the art is concerned, I think progz has shown you that even within MSpaint, you can produce something that looks good, progZ edit didnt require huge skill, just a touch more patience than your art would imply that you indulge in when you are drawing.

Sorry to be a moaner, but maybe take some more time, really think about your jokes, try hader with your art and overall just spend more time on it.

PsychicHeart · Fri 02/03/2007 01:19:29

Okay, The site is now up.
Obviously i hope to get proper hosting and a dotcom domain, but this is just a temporary hosting place until i can store it on a more permanent location.
Cheers,
Fluke.
PS: If you could join the forums, that'd be great

niallak · Mon 05/03/2007 16:41:22

Theres another webcomic thats really funny. Its called Ctrl+Alt+Del and its about two guys that just sit around playing video agmes all day its sooooo funny

Akatosh · Mon 05/03/2007 18:00:30

Ahem... yes. You know you just veryfied (spelling? at a complete loss

- verifyed? verified? veryfyed?) about 99.99% of all my prejudices against gamer webcomics' readers, yes?

Mr Flibble · Mon 05/03/2007 19:39:01

Why would the door code being Daikitana cause violence?

Just because it sucked in stereo doesn't mean.... *sigh*

I don't even know, some of those don't even have jokes.

InCreator · Tue 06/03/2007 01:50:21

Seriously, I'm not supposed to be posting this...

http://www.increator.pri.ee/i/pull/omfg.png

ThreeOhFour · Tue 06/03/2007 03:55:38

Quote from: InCreator on Tue 06/03/2007 01:50:21
Seriously, I'm not supposed to be posting this...

http://www.increator.pri.ee/i/pull/omfg.png

...oh my... :o

So wrong, but it fits so well!

PsychicHeart · Tue 06/03/2007 04:33:33

Thanks for the...comments? (praise doesn't sound like the right word)
Anyway, as the couple of people who have started to read it would know, i've opened it up to a 4-panel strip.
Perhaps THIS will draw you from your high-horse.
Maybe.

esper · Tue 06/03/2007 06:34:47

Don't do it on Blogspot.

www.smackjeeves.com

It's designed for webcomics, and if you at least look at one other person's strip and post a comment once a week or so you'll have a ton of people visiting your site. Just make sure you're actually ready to do so.

Andail · Tue 06/03/2007 18:03:21

I think you're doing a good job. You're being serious, and you really try.

I don't think the comics are funny yet, and this is basically because you haven't had time to refine them enough, or to grow enough personally.
Most very young people tend to create comedy more based on what they expect people to find funny, rather than things they sincerely find funny themselves.

This is extra blatant in your latest strip, which is about agreeing to shop with someone in exchange for sex, which is a situation I highly doubt you know anything about personally.

You're 14, write about your daily life, make comedy about kid-stuff, and don't pretend so much.

Nikolas · Tue 06/03/2007 18:18:07

Fluke

I personally laughed with the latest two (the sex one, and the qucik reply one)... Especially the sex one, made a very convinsing connection with my life

so...

Yup!

and thanks for being persistant and keep on doing that. Don't stop!

esper · Tue 06/03/2007 18:18:42

I don't understand the sex one... And I'm almost twice your age (Fluke, not Nik). Could you kindly enlighten me?

PS: Been reading the Battle Royale manga, and just realized when I was checking out your latest comics I was reading them right-to-left. I still don't get the sex one...

Nikolas · Tue 06/03/2007 18:20:10

Men hate shoping! I honestly do!

the only reason one would go to a shoping mall is for sex afterwards (the reward). At least this is what I thought of it

esper · Tue 06/03/2007 18:22:17

Still don't get it.

And am I to believe that these guys are nothing more than little chubby weiners? The one where he first sees Radarette weems to indicate this. Although on my first readthrough, as I said a moment ago, it was from right to left, so he actually got shrinkage from seeing her.

Nikolas · Tue 06/03/2007 18:26:49

dunno...

I personally found it funny. And I could relate!

Additionally, I don't know if it's on purpose or not, but the "MALL" sign is not seen on the first two instantly, so the mind cannot make the connection straight away. But after you see the sign you know that "Hehe... that guy is forced to go in a mall, because he's been blackmailed..."

Akatosh · Wed 07/03/2007 17:12:25

You're seeming to get better

LGM · Wed 07/03/2007 18:16:32

You're getting better, but be careful you don't tread over trodden ground. Video game humor is a dime a dozen. Try your best to be original.

FSi++ · Wed 07/03/2007 18:36:01

Er. Just tried making something in your style. Took me 30 minutes.

ManicMatt · Wed 07/03/2007 18:53:28

That's not any funnier than Fluke's jokes, imo. Although seeing the yellow one skipping made me laugh!