Character for game, C&C please Now with walkcycle

[[Cameron]]

I dirtied him up and used TIkiTikiMan's picture to improve him. Instead of being shot on his wedding day, his wife was killed at the wedding and he gave chase to the killers. A week later they come back to finish him of while he is drunk. He hasn't been to work because of what happened to his wife and he sits in his aprtment for a while until finally he wakes up. If anybody has an ideaas to his waking up please tell. but don't make them to Crow like. The talk animation looks like it will be hard.


I also added some organs just to make Os happy.

[[Cameron]]

This walkcycle took ages, but HUZZUH it is finished.


and talking

[InCreator]

I like the idea! Drawing has turned out pretty good aswell.
But just saying this is wasting space in critics lounge. so...

- Eye holes in skull are usually bigger than eyes itsself.
- Skull needs a bit more darker gray to shade it out better.
- Skull looks a bit too flat at the top. Add a pixelwide line onto top of the skull to correct it.
- Walkcycle is absolutely okay. Maybe add driping blood to it? Just an idea.
- Another way to improve the walkcycle is to add a shadow of the hand onto pants while it moves over them.
- Work with the talk-view. Human beings usually lower the jaw to open the mouth, instead of moving whole head and keeping jaw still.

[Haddas]

The walkcycle is nice, but maybe make it a little slower and zombielike. But hey, I can't animate for shit, so don't take me too seriously. I only draw random characters

[[Cameron]]

I trying to stay away from the stereotype. This guy has resence of mind and intelliganence.

[Redwall]

Nice to see Eric's template getting some use

Great work though.

[[Cameron]]

Photorealistic picture i drew.

[Redwall]

Heh, skull would be a lot smaller.

[Scummbuddy]

Perhaps his murderer killed him before his funeral and ...

 

I would also suggest that you move it to the day before the wedding or something, not day of, just to get rid of the confusion.

[viktor]

I Im not tat godd a drawing

Say tha again and i'll slap you silly. 
Look what you have acomplished. Some people only dream that they could create characters that good.
But all in all this is great. The art is great and the walkcicle is pretty smooth. But try patching up the talk wiew a bit...

[MoodyBlues]

Perhaps his murderer killed him before his funeral and ...

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:DÃ,  Oops!Ã,  I meant "before his wedding."

[[Cameron]]

I drew him after he finds some clothes. I gave him a bowler and a zip up jacket. I need to draw a scarf but it didn't look right. Can you help me?

[[Cameron]]

Improved talk cycle.

[[Cameron]]

Here is the main char fully clothed to hide his wounds.