Cafeteria C&C

Started by Morgan, Sun 01/06/2003 20:58:32

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Morgan

This is the cafeteria in a space ship. This is the first room I have finished for my new game. C&C please

Mr Jake

#1
Nice, but I dont like the bin, it looks slightly outta place, a bit too big and flat. Its a  better pic then I could do :)
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TheYak

Agreed.. based upon the camera angle, the bottom of the bin should have more curve and the top should be slightly more visible.  The table should be flatter (in other words, smaller vertically).  Excellent pic, very clean.  You might consider softening some of those black lines using other colors.  But a very functional and decent looking room, nonetheless.

makri

The walls are off perspective... that makes the room look sloped.
Thud. Thud. Thud. Splat.

Neole

If you crop the image where the ceiling begins it should look perfect.

Synthetique

#5
the guy at the table seems to have a floating chair.. right?

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