C&C on Tommy. (RY)

RyRayer · Thu 26/05/2005 14:20:02

This is my main character for Tommy Lebrando.
I don't know what to do with him and maybe you guys could help me out.
I just feel that his not piratey enough.

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Haddas · Thu 26/05/2005 14:28:00

First of all, he looks like a teen, dressed as a pirate. Make the bandana more piratey, and make the beard a little more piratey. That looks too modern.

ildu · Thu 26/05/2005 14:52:47

I think he pretty much looks like a wigga now. Change the position of the feet. Make his face thinner and more interesting. Add an earring.

MarVelo · Thu 26/05/2005 21:01:04

I tried a few new thing e.x:

1. Larger beard
2. earing
3. taller boots
4. smaller neck

RyRayer · Thu 26/05/2005 21:08:37

Oh. Boots are nice. I'll change his head and clothes a bit.

Anarcho · Thu 26/05/2005 21:10:32

I think his legs look a bit off---if he were a real person he'd probably fall over standing that way i.e. with his legs so far apart. I'd also say that his torso is a little too long and his legs are a little too short. But the boots rock!

RyRayer · Thu 26/05/2005 21:48:59

Ok, here's a new version of Tom. I took your advice.
Made the bandana and beard more piratey,
made his face thinner.
His legs aren't so far apart now.
Changed his clothes.

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Any advice or suggestions for it now?

ildu · Thu 26/05/2005 23:35:13

Much much better. For this pic though, you could make the beard a bit lighter and greyer. Also, emphasize the eyes and mouth some more.

MarVelo · Fri 27/05/2005 00:44:26

Good fixes! I am quite happy with the way you addapted the boots I made. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to play your game!

Haddas · Fri 27/05/2005 08:41:30

Dunno if this is an improvement or not. Shortened his neck a bit. Made his beard a little greyer and repositioned the beardto look somewhat more natural

RyRayer · Fri 27/05/2005 09:26:20

whoa. Yes, it's good. I'll use it in my game. You can all give C&C on Tommy's torso and body now. He has to be a weak man, who drinks grog, but not too fat.

MarVelo · Sat 28/05/2005 03:48:00

Not many changes I really just widened the body a little. Oh well this may just be a useless post...

RyRayer · Sat 28/05/2005 09:17:50

Yeah, Taffy T. It's not helping, but don't worry I think this is ready now.
Next, i'm trying to make a walk cycle to him, but that's my problem now.

I will post my help message here

, in this thread, when I need any help.

And I thank you all for your help.

FINAL:

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