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[SLaMgRInDeR]

i like the writer, but the walk looks odd as his foot kinda kicks out infront. as for the warefolf, i thing penguinx's is the best so far, the casual pose seems more like what you said you wanted rather than the hunched one

[Morgan]

I have done some changes to the walk cycle and I made it bigger for better viewing pleasure.

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[Eggie]

I think his arms should 'flow a little more rather than be 'stop/start'.

If you know what I mean, my fine bannana ointment...

[SLaMgRInDeR]

yeh, they seem to go out then snap to the middle then go back then snap back to the middle.

[Morgan]

Is this better.

There is one more frame in his front arm moving back than his front arm moving forword. Can anyone tell by looking at it?