Crit my Webcomic

[dsg_charly]

Ahoy there!

Instead of fancy pants, I propose you some webcomic (my 1st one): http://buildfailed.blogspot.com/

Plot: some guys (and girls) working for a bank as computer science engineer. This is intend to be comic 

All crits are welcomed.

Thanx in advance guys (and girls).

[Ghost]

Well. You've got steady lines, and the concept (while not original, but what is these days ) of some geeks doing software has potential. It *reads* a bit strange- English isn't my first language, but I think "If you see what I mean" is plain wrong, at least in this context. You're obviously no native speaker either, so it would be a good idea to double-check your sentences. People will forgive the odd error, true, but having someone go over your lines will surely improve the experience.

Three panel jokes are tricky. This one falls a bit flat. It's set-up in the standard "start, lead-up, punch line" fashion, but... okay. Where's the punch line? (Is Nemo part of the punch line? Who's Nemo?)
And, you can kill me now, I really can't say that I actually LIKE any of the characters. They look plain weird to me, but that's a personal opinion. A bit too bland, though the guy in the second panel at least has a Funny Shirt.

Please take all of this as constructive crits; I'm not going for the kill here.   God knows I wish everyone who can create a webcomic with constant updates all the luck in the world. It's also pretty hard to judge an episodic comic based on one strip. I know exactly one webcomic where the first strip's setup totally grabbed me and dragged me all the way to the last one.

[dsg_charly]

Thanks a lot dude!

I've posted for crits, and crits you gave me. 

Advantage here is that friends and familly are not good at crits.

Outside look is always better.