first attempts at bg and...

[DNA]

first attempts at a backround, close up, and a bottle for good measure...

what do yall think?

[Privateer Puddin']

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nice, but a little OTT with the wood perhaps :)

[Erwin_Br]

I love it, although the perspective could be improved here and there. (The typewriter for example)

The heavy textures may be a bit too much, but it's great distinctive style so I wouldn't worry too much about that.

--Erwin

[earlwood]

Basically perspective problems, I don't particulary care for the flat look from the seat or the computer, but not bad, It also seems a bit like the object are kinda floating..maybe little dents in the carpet or something...

[Evil]

Yes, it looks great but needs some perspective help. Love the cup by the way ...

[Hinders]

Nice! But the computer looks odd

[ravenfusion]

I would've expected a typewriter in place of the laptop...

[Isegrim]

Hmm... I think it would also be cool if the floor texture had some feel of perspective (don't know what paint program you use, but in Photo-Paint I would use a skewed rectangle...)
Otherwise: Stunning! :o

P.S: I like the writing on the bottle... Sounds tasty  

[Squinky]

The drawer and the bottle rock, but the first scene needs less wood or some work done to it, and  perspectives cleaned up. Really intersting though, I would really dig the first if not for those minor probs...

[Scummbuddy]

On the bottle, take out the first "a" written in the paragraph.