Please give me feedback on this sprite

Started by Ytterbium, Tue 04/11/2003 20:53:48

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Ytterbium

I just finished one frame of the sprite for the playable character in my game. Here's a screenshot of him, with Roger Eco for comparison size. What does everyone think? Good, bad, too colorful, unrealistic?


Currently in production: Septigon

Privateer Puddin'

im not a good artisté but one thing i do notice, the arms should be different, seeing the side of them, not the front of them.. if you see what i mean

Ytterbium

He's actually standing with the back of his hands facing forward. Some people do that.

Currently in production: Septigon

Andail

yeah, but do as Custard says and change the arms, and behold the improvement.

kaaZ

There's hardly any shading on that dude...he look pretty flat now...agree on the arms as well....
There's an enormous space between his body and his arms...some people do stand like your sprite does I myself find it extremely uncomfortable/unnatural to take a pose like that...I would advise to have a look at real people and their postures.
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