Guess her job...

[Technocrat]

Well, I'm practicing a slightly different style, and I want to make sure that people, at a glance, can have a fair guess at what this young woman's occupation is, based on the way she's dressed.

I'll put up a 4-direction tomorrow, when I've finished it!
So, any suggestions to improve on how she looks before I get on to making the rest of her would be extremely useful!

Edit: New bits - see latest posts

[qptain Nemo]

A bloody WHORE.

[WHAM]

I'd also go with a cheap call-girl.
Or perhaps one of those poor girls in those degrading bikini car-washes.

Yum!

On suggestions: her boobies seem to end quite low at the moment, almost at the level of her belly-button. I suggest either making 'em smaller, or making her tummy taller.

[cat]

I think she is a dancer (but an erotic one that does not put off her clothes)

I like her hair and her face, but her pants are not shaded very well. If you want outlines, consider using a different color for shading.

The two colors of her top are way too similar, make them more different.

[ThreeOhFour]

Here's a quick paintover:



Just a few easy changes for things that caught my eye.

[Technocrat]

Here's a quick paintover:



Just a few easy changes for things that caught my eye.

haha, mine looks so downright amateurish compared to that!

And the first guess by qptain Nemo was spot on - she is indeed, a WHORE (exactly the word I'd been thinking of, in fact)

[Anian]

...not that there's anything rong with them, but maybe fishnet stockings would help the overall look? And a purse, she's even got the hand in a correct position to add a purse there.
Uh, and make sure she's chewing gum or something. Ok, that's enough of my movie depiction of the night ladies.

[WHAM]

anian just gave me a flashback from the original Leisure Suit Larry... Gah!

[cianty]

Funny... when I read the thread title, clicked on it, while the page was loading and I was thinking about what to expect... guess what I did expect to come up... :

[m0ds]

Primary school teacher...

.....Oh.

:

[TheRoger]

Hmm...I thought she cleans cars.
Like these girls:


That's one dirty car...  

[Hudders]

Scandalous!  :o

[Anian]

Scandalous!  :o

...but that car is my idol.

[Tabata]

My first thought was about those waitresses on rollerblades, but the blades are missing.

Second one goes to a whore, but the pouch is missing. As a typical sign they swing it while going along the street, always in competitors to their hips.

So I ended up with a teenie, who's not quite knowing how to dress in a sexy way (like first try from young girls with makeup). They often fail and it ends in looking like a whore, but that's no job.

... but the girl TheRoger came up with fits more to it - of course he was only remembering it because of this wonderful car      - so I would believe it to be a car-washing-girl

[m0ds]

Sophia Hapgood in 1985!

[Igor Hardy]

Wow! Will this be the heroine of the next Technobabylon?

[Technocrat]

Wow! Will this be the heroine of the next Technobabylon?

That would be quite a shift in style if she were in Technobabylon 4 - Tabata will be furious, but this isn't Technobabylon I'm doing it for at the moment - I've got a secondary project in mind!




So, having borrowed/outright stolen a few elements of style from Ben304's style, here's a revamped Nancy the Happy Whore, from a front view as well. I'm thinking of giving her the purse soon (a visible excuse for an inventory!), I guess that would go better in her right hand than her left.

GIRLS+CARS

Do I need a car-washing mini-game in this?

[TheRoger]

damn...I duplicated... don't know how to erase.

[TheRoger]

Do I need a car-washing mini-game in this?

Well that would be BIG plus 

[Calin Leafshade]

Accountant.

no wait...

Tax Accountant.