drawing a strong chick (sprite)

[SuperCarott]

What about this one? (just ignore my ol' good slaveÃ,  )

("Also, the hair bit thats hanging out still looks odd. Too much hair gel?"
by popular demand, the story of the hairbit!
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v254/mutantleg/hairbit.gif
As you see back then the game started in rpgmaker2000, and i was too lazy to draw my own characters from scratch. So, when i finally get good enough to redesign the charaters the hair that covered the "female-ninja's" eyes evolved into the hairbit.)

[elle]

yeah this one is a lot better especially the face, though i think maybe the chest could be mistaken for a large (muscly)Ã,  guy's chestÃ,  or maybe i'm stupid hehe

[Krazy]

yeah this one is a lot better especially the face, though i think maybe the chest could be mistaken for a large (muscly)  guy's chest  or maybe i'm stupid hehe

No you're right, they do sort of look like a guys muscly chest rather than breasts.

[SuperCarott]

[HJRodrigo]

The perspective of the chest looks a bit un centralized.  Here is a quick edit  that tries to centralize the breast correctly, while keeping the correct perspective.

[viktor]

well I think that looks a lot beter. But the breasts still looked strange to me. They were just to round (I know theyr supose to be smartass ).
It's not a BIG change but I think it looks better this way.

BTW. I changed her left foot a bit to. I just extended it for 1 pixel.

[SuperCarott]

Hold your horses, i know it could be improved like ten million more times, but i want to start on the animations and such. 

Thanks for the help everyone, i couldnt do this one without you 

[auhsor]

Heh well I've got one more suggestion. How about making the face a touch darker to match with the darkest bit on the arms.

[Gfunkera]

Ya' know I was thinking after looking down through the posts maybe she might look more girly if her hair was blonde or red? Black is rarley anyones hair color more of a dark dark brown.

Here is an example of what I mean, although I suck w/ hair & shading 

Vs.

I think the blonde will realy work for it. Maybe add a lil' green bow in her hair 

[elle]

the red one is funny lol she looks like a drag queen
blonde isnt such a bad idea..