Help with my character

Mouth for war · Thu 24/07/2008 21:25:10

Hi there! I've been going crazy over this now and decided i should ask for some help. HereÂ´s the character IÂ´m gonna use in my game...as you can see i can't get the front view right...don't really know what to do...maybe someone could help me out here

ambientcoffeecup · Thu 24/07/2008 21:45:59

Give him some feet would be a good start.

Mouth for war · Thu 24/07/2008 21:52:58

the feet is not the issue here...itÂ´s the face i'm talking about

Babar · Thu 24/07/2008 22:05:29

His front view makes it look like he has a double chin. You should lower the chin pixels one or two pixels down.

Mouth for war · Thu 24/07/2008 22:10:22

yes i took care of that...looks better...i'm not sure what else to do...do they look similar? i mean...it doesn't look like someone else on the front view compared to the sideview?

Tuomas · Thu 24/07/2008 23:13:13

I think it looks pretty much liek the other guy there, in other words, they look the same. Though here's a point to consider. In the side view, the guys jaw looks a lot wider because he's got this manly corner there. However, on the front view the chin seems to go up and in like a triangle. I'd say widen his jaw just a bit to make it look more, say, manly/mature.

Matti · Fri 25/07/2008 00:10:55

I tried to do what Tuomas suggested, put each ear one pixel to the middle and changed the shading/chin a bit.

monkey0506 · Fri 25/07/2008 01:20:30

Maybe it's just me...but based on the side-view it seems like in the front-view his eyes should be further apart.

IMO the side view looks great. The front is good, but still needs a little something to match up to the side.

Maybe the ears shouldn't be so wide in the front view as well?

Makeout Patrol · Fri 25/07/2008 09:02:58

It looks to me like his shoulders are horribly broken - I'd try putting his arms more behind his torso than they are right now and see how that looks. The face actually looks fine to me.

Paper Carnival · Fri 25/07/2008 09:19:12

I like it, but I'd say his collar in the front view looks kinda odd. Try to make it more curvy in the middle. Otherwise, I can't think of anything else that is obvious.

Ryan Timothy B · Mon 28/07/2008 20:03:45

I was just messing around and this is what I came up with. I used the large jaw version that Matti posted.

I removed the dark mouth on both views, and the dark ear holes on the front view.
Tried to give him a bum chin.
Also decreased the width of his neck.
Changed his hair around a little.
Removed dark lump on cheek in side view.
Changed front of his collar to match other collar.