C&C a Room and a character for my first game

[Krysis]

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Here is the last version. 10x guys, I think its good now.

1.Like my room most of the stuff is gattered though the years, so the furniture is different.
2. The cup shows "AGS".
3.The "At-At model" is a silly gift from a boy who loves Star Wars and Dungeons&Dragons. You meet him in the game.
4. The Canadian flag just looks cool so the girl put it there.
5. The girl likes every shade of blue and purple.

Im off to make other backgrounds, characters and stuff.

[Joelman]

The only thing I can think of to spruce it up a bit, is to put something out the window, kinda looks like a mirror with drapes.
but maybe that's just me :^D

[Scummbuddy]

to give some understanding to my 'personal decorator' bit, i was kinda quoting "men in black" but i was talking about toning down the color of the big dresser... but hey, I like the whole image.

Probably my last crit, is that the bedside table seems to not follow the perspective correctly. The [our] left side seems to follow its own distant perspective, but I would have it go to the left until you couldnt see it anymore behind the big dresser.
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I hope that is not her stance when she is not walking. She seems more like shes about to do a ballet move, not relax into her own posture. I'm not trying to be mean, so please don't take it that way. Also, the green coming through her hair is very strong, I would rethink that.
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And is that a "Asteriods are Bad" poster above the bed?

[Kiddie]

     
Here is the last version. 10x guys, I think its good now.

I love the room, however, I'd personally change a few things:



I think a more brown, or atleast painted (other than pea soup yellow ) would look better for the dresser.  Also I changed the light fixture a bit on the ceiling, as it looked a little too industrial before (dark steel grey).  And lastly, I added some bushes or something on the other side of the window to give it something extra (as Joelman mentioned).

[Krysis]

Really Really last version I hope.



The window is good as it is trust me. Wait till u see the sky in some other picture.

[Kiddie]

Looking good.

[jasonjkay]

looks better, just one question. What is the black thing in the foreground near the bed? I like the bear and the mug  but the black thing looks weird.

[Corey]

your care for detail is absolutely the shit!! keep it going 

[Scummbuddy]

3.The "At-At model" is a silly gift from a boy who loves Star Wars and Dungeons&Dragons. You

[jasonjkay]

Ok thanks, I kind of see it now. I guess I should have read the posts more carefully. I guess it looks alright, im just a bit embarrased at being a huge star wars fan and not seeing what it was.

[TheMagician]

What a great background.  :o
I love how it evolved!

Somehow the girl reminds me of Violetta from "The Incredibles" ... her hair ... 

So again ... very nice work!!

[Darth Mandarb]

Somehow the girl reminds me of Violetta from "The Incredibles" ... her hair ...

Also, I love the sprite of the little girl.  She looks a bit like the daughter from 'The Incredibles'!

That's what I thought too.