'Jacob' sprites - doll up (frontal nudity)

ThreeOhFour · Mon 31/12/2007 05:03:23

Hehehe! You managed to find a photo with the exact expression!

Also, the one on the left has arms that are folded, however they don't look quite right. The hand probably shouldn't be so far away from the arm - fold your arms and look at them - you should see one hand resting on the bicep.

vertigoaddict · Mon 31/12/2007 07:47:34

I was actually surprized he found a person with similar features! Short brown hair, light skin, green eyes, short eyebrows, small lips.

Okay, how's this?

I've added freckles to April too.

lo_res_man · Mon 31/12/2007 09:13:04

My gods! Her breasts are bigger then her face! The hands miss bubular cluster is rather good if the posing of them is weird, but madame ribbon arms over on the lefts hand is far too small. A good guide to face hand proportion is the rule of thumb that your spread out hand should be as big as your 'mask' that is your features. As well I know from personal experience that this pose is a devil to do right, but the arms look far too flat and are posed rather weird.

vertigoaddict · Mon 31/12/2007 09:19:09

So, more plastic surgery needed huh? ^_6

Galen · Mon 31/12/2007 09:41:52

Ease up on the nipple perkiness just a tiny bit.

frission · Thu 03/01/2008 20:56:55

The bare feet look a little weird. They're fine with shoes on so if she's not going barefoot I wouldn't worry about it. But with all of her toes the same size and on the same plane they look like animal feet, not human feet. Human feet have a slant to them (take a look down at yours).

vertigoaddict · Sat 05/01/2008 02:11:25

Quote from: frission on Thu 03/01/2008 20:56:55
The bare feet look a little weird. They're fine with shoes on so if she's not going barefoot I wouldn't worry about it. But with all of her toes the same size and on the same plane they look like animal feet, not human feet. Human feet have a slant to them (take a look down at yours).

*looks at own feet* OH MY GOD! I'M A FREAK!

Okay, I'll work on it and edit this post, her feet does look kinda wierd... ^_6

vertigoaddict · Wed 09/01/2008 12:03:16

Okay... I worked my well-rounded ass off with miss ribbon arms on the left!
Her hands are bigger and the other one is slightly hidden so it looks smaller.

April's breasts are less perky her toes are not all the same size and just to show that there actually ae going to be guys in this game...

It's not done yet, but you can still critt it if you want to. I'll still take note.

I'm thinking of asking multiple animators to work in this project so I can speed up the process, think that'd be okay?

Khris · Thu 10/01/2008 17:01:47

Here's a very sloppy attempt to fix the face:

It's still pretty off but should push you in the right direction.

Galen · Thu 10/01/2008 18:16:58

Reduced "side-cling" around the stomach area. I also gave her more of a (I can't think of a more tackful descriptive term than this) mono-boob to make her blouse look more natural.

vict0r · Fri 11/01/2008 08:25:21

Quote from: KhrisMUC on Thu 10/01/2008 17:01:47
Here's a very sloppy attempt to fix the face:

It's still pretty off but should push you in the right direction.

Might be off, but still looks a whole lot more natural than the original one.

vertigoaddict · Mon 14/01/2008 18:59:40

I'll try to fix the face...

but meanwhile, please crit on the side view of this sprite