king of rock 2- 3rd background

[viktor]

these are realy cool backgrounds. Hope nobody minds if I borow one of them. 

[viktor]

update!!
I added a new background for your critics.

[Johnny Odd]

The new b/g rocks.
I would say you should make the wheels bigger oin that van and move them closer towards the front and back of the vehical... Then you would be able to see the other front wheel on the far side - because now you can't and it kinda looks like it's floating.

I like it all though. Shading is cool. Angles look O.K.
Cool.

[Daz]

that is one loooooong building maybe break it up abit and a few perspective problems which can easily be changed. And im just wondering if someone has puked on the wall next to the scull and cross bones?

looks nice

-Daz

[viktor]

Yes that is PUKE. Im fact that is brians puke. It's a gag in the game that I'm not telling before the game is released. Hope you can wait 10 years 

I'm fixing the background at this wery moment.

You'll have to be more specific on the perspectives problem. So I'll know what to fix.

[pixelcat]

Looks cool... only major problem I can see is the graffiti looks like it's floating.

[viktor]

here is a little fix. I fixed the skull and the wheels. Then I added a bit more detail to the porch, and added a poster on to the wall.

[pixelcat]

Looks good, though the outline around the skull takes focus away from its surroundings, even the van which looks like it would be the main focus. It needs to blend in with the wall somehow, same with the poster.

[viktor]

how bout now. I just used the main color of the skull and poster and darkend them. The I used THAT color for the outlines.

[Daz]

sorry to tell you this after all these edits but the drain looks as if the right side has lifted up with no hole underneath, change that a your probally there

hope you understand what im trying to say, hehe

-Daz

[pixelcat]

Much better, nice work.

[viktor]

sorry to tell you this after all these edits but the drain looks as if the right side has lifted up with no hole underneath, change that a your probally there

hope you understand what I'm trying to say, hehe

-Daz

no problem. That's why I posted the picture before I used it in a game. For you to tell me what's wrong.
The edits I'm going to make when I have the time:
- Split up the bouilding
- fix the drain
- Make more detail to the sidewalk (cracks in the round and a nother sewer drain)

[viktor]

Ok here are the fixes I promised. But I think that  the boulding looked better whet it wasn't split up...

[Darth Mandarb]

I do think it looks better split up, but the perspective on the 'inner' wall of the new building is off.Ã,  It should follow the lines of the sidewalk!

Here's a quick paint-over:

- added perspective fix to building side
- added some details to blue building (brick lines)
- added some shadows (window/door)
- changed the street grate thingee into a rounded type thing (not sure of the terminology here)

I ran out of time and have to go back to the dentist ... hope this helps in some way!

[viktor]

DARTH! YOU ARE THE BOMB: Thanks a milion. No! Make that a bilion. I'm definetly going to us ethis background. But I am probably not going to use the bricks that you made in to the wall. Becouse I didn't actualy want the bricks to be seen.

But thenks anyway.

[viktor]

I just finished a new background (ok ok it was actualy finished before the street baackground). I can't put my finger on it but something's wrong here. Could you please help me. Is it the angels. The grass? The sky? I just on't get it. I tryed almoast ewerithing.

[Moox]

where the cement meets the grass is kinda sharp, the fountain also kinda looks weird because the top is offcenter

[Daz]

that statue of brian may rocks
make the grass a little lighter and thats all i notice atm

great work

-Daz

[Sam.]

My main problem is that piece of fence. It sticks out from nowhere. (is it a bin? if so make it rounder) but other tan tha, great bg

[Tiki]

There aren't any shadows on the pavement around the fountain.   The fountain, among nearly everything else, has shading, but the ground doesn't, making all that plain grey stand out.  Maybe you should give the fountain and statue a shadow on that pavement.  Other 'n that, great job!