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Started by vict0r, Mon 24/10/2005 21:29:51

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vict0r

As some of you may have understood i'm making a MacGyver game (yay) but got abit off-track some weeks/months ago. But now im back on track :P Sooo.... What do you think of this sideview compared to the frontview? (you already critisized the front view so drop it!)





the "extra" face is just where i got the colours from... please dont mind it




(quick paintovers are always welcome)

IM NOT TEH SPAM

It looks too much like his mouth is on that side of his face.  Plus it looks like he's very tense--despite the calm look in his face.

viktor

#2
I don't think that the mouth is to much of a problem. What I find strange is the shading in the front wiew. You can't tell where the light is coming from. His pants and jacket are coloured on the left and right. It kind of dosn't seem natural.  Otherwise I think that your sprite is quite good. A little polishing here and there and I think you have an exelent sprite.
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Eigen

I once started to work on a MacGyver game as well, but never got further than one view. Perhaps it helps you. I think it kinda looks like Mac.


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-Eigen

vict0r




Yes... Decreased his head-size some and bended his back some. Did some more too, that i dont really remember, but sure you see it.


Yeah! Added some shades too!







Damned bmps.... ::)

vict0r

Well, since noone said anything, i guess i can be satisfied :-\ :P Is it okay now or what?

Scummbuddy

#6
Well, it just depends on how much you want it to resemble Richard Dean Anderson. To me, this has nothing to do with him, besides a brown jacket.

Eigens version is pretty close, but I would still suggest you work on making it somewhat close to Richard. I mean, Indy sprites from the old games were pretty good at capturing Harrison, but didn't have to be huge sprites. But then again, it has to do with what style your bgs are going to be in as well.
- Oh great, I'm stuck in colonial times, tentacles are taking over the world, and now the toilets backing up.
- No, I mean it's really STUCK. Like adventure-game stuck.
-Hoagie from DOTT

Krysis

Just wasting time. Hope that helps.

vict0r

Gah! I just realised how much my drawing suck!


Thanks anyhoo :P You made that now? Thats good!

vict0r




I'm quite happy with it now actually :P What do you think? Totally different :P

Nikolas

He looks a bit more harsh that he is in reality, but I think that it's great! Now he reminds me very much of Richard. I think that his torso is a little too big, but we have to wait for krysis to solve this probably.

The only thing left to do is to change your avatar.  ;)

vict0r

#11
aye:P Agree he looks... really really angry:P trying to fix it now:P

EDIT:


Scummbuddy

you havent fixed all the black outlines to be darker outlines, such as a darker brown for the pants, instead of black, like what you did with the darker pink for the face outline.
- Oh great, I'm stuck in colonial times, tentacles are taking over the world, and now the toilets backing up.
- No, I mean it's really STUCK. Like adventure-game stuck.
-Hoagie from DOTT

vict0r



I'm pretty satisfied now, but what do you think?

Ubel

I really don't think the head fits in with the style of the body. The body has a lot more contrast. Maybe darken the outline of his hair a bit... Then it might fit better.

Andail

#15
Sprite drawing isn't my strength, really, but I had a go at this one:
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The clothes could need a lot of shading, as they appear pretty flat right now.

vict0r

Its really nice, but what are those really dark lines om his pants? I love it! :P

Haddas

You just drew yourself didn't you Andail?

Nikolas

If you take off another 15-20 pounds yeah. I have an impression of Andail being really really slim... ;D

vict0r

Hmm... Now that you mention it, he looks alot like andails avatar :P

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