A character: Brett (edit 5)

[Keebo]

Maybe you could add a shoe lases? Other than that its amazing.  8)

[Erwin_Br]

hey erwin... I love your art!

the new sideview rocks! strazer did a nice job....

some crits for the front view:
in his front view he looks much fatter then in the sideview, try making him a little less fat .

then his hands, it looks like he has his hands behind his butt a little. I think the fingers should be visible in front of his pants (hard to explain) .

I also would make his head a little less pumped up. but that's personal I think.

For the rist I think it's awesome!

Yeah, I have to work on it some more. The sideview has a nice bended line going on, if you know what I mean. I'll have to bring that back in the front view too.

--Erwin

[Darkizar]

Like the character, very lovable  .

The sideview is really great, but he does look alittle fat in front view.

Here is my own humble edit, don't know if you can use it to anything.

[strazer]

And here's my version:



Side view:

As you can see, I shortened the mouth a bit, I thought it's a bit too extreme, but I guess that's just your style.
What I think is important is that you round the back of the head to imply the round cheeks as seen in the front view.

Front view:

While painting, once in a while you have to make sure everything lines up properly. Notice the jacket, face etc.
I changed the hair and face around a bit too, so it fits with the side view better.

I like the character a lot and I look forward to your game.

[edmundito]

It reminds me of the standing pose Fry from Futurama would have. Fun!

[Erwin_Br]

I brought Brett's arms to the front, as in Strazer's (once again exellent) example. I also used Strazer's hands, because I really like them. I also edited other parts of his body. I didn't want him too look too symetrical, as you can see from his jacket. I'm quite fond of Brett's face, so I didn't change it.

I'm currently working on the back-pose.

Thanks for the comments and edits. I really appreciate it!

--Erwin

[Erwin_Br]

Created a back-view:



What do you think about the shoes and the hood?

--Erwin

[strazer]

The hood should have a visible opening at the top and the tips of the shoes are too far up. Otherwise it's great! Love the hands.