A song + midi for criticism

[Damien]

My friend got himselfÃ, a bass guitar, and he came up with a simple bassline, then I added chords, little improvised solo and this song was born:

Summer.mp3.zip
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Here's a midi I've been working on today:

D_TFM.mid

Any ideas on how to improve it or critics are welcome.

[Damien]

Bump.

[Gregjazz]

Nice feel. Kinda laidback. Drums get old after a while, though. Maybe make a better hihat groove and cleaner drums -- less echo-ey 80's.

[Damien]

You mean the mp3 one? Cause that was made in about 20 minutes, the percs were kind of quickly aranged in Fruity Loops, so yeah they suck.
The song's really not my style, it was made for fun, but I'd like to "upgrade" it to sound better, and maybe even make lyrics for it.