Sketches, C&C

[Fronzel]

Here is a sketch I did, wondering what ya'll thought of it, any C&C would be appreciated (I'd like to improve in the art department)

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[[Cameron]]

Fallout fan, perhaps. Its great i love the pic. with the arms, is he holding a shotgun?

[Fronzel]

Thanks, he's not holding anything, just didn't want to have the arms at the same position.
I hadn't thought about fallout, but, I do see a resemblance.

[Fronzel nlg]

*Bump*

Any thoughts on it? Proportion that could be fixed, etc?

[big brother]

Forearms look short, waist looks low, legs look short, chest region sags outward, stance looks awkward (did someone say 'air guitar'?), and colors look garish. He might appreciate some ears...

To give your character substance, try working around a central curve for his stance. Also employ a contraposto position, with his higher hip on the same side with his lower shoulder.

[Fronzel nlg]

Thank you!  Knew there was something wrong with the hip-shoulder relationship there, but couldn't decide what.  He does have ears though, just not well defined in the sketch.  On leg length, whats the proportion on leg length to body length, I seem to remember the head is roughly 1/6, but I always seem to make my legs too short, and a little on the beefy side.  Yeah, the coloring was done late at night, and I ended up not liking my color job, I might just post the uncolored sketch when I get back.

[Fronzel]

Hey here's another sketch, which I won't color this time (had a bad time of that on the first one).Ã,  Thoughts? C&C?