Finally made some sprites,,,need comments and critics

[fertoff]

i'm still working on that #@!!''$%# walking cicle...too hard to get it right...

Meanwhile(trying not to get frustrated) i made this sprites ...
tell me what you think

the usual spinin man(missing back pic)



And the talkie sprite ("uhh, he can talk..)



frames speed may not be right,,,but well, they are just the first version

thanks for your time

[CobraKaun]

I think they're really good. Good transition of the character through different angles. Keep up the good work. =)

[InCreator]

They actually ARE good. Only suggestion maybe would be to use more shading on face (with the color that's on his neck on last picture) and maybe on pants, it's shading looks somewhat random and cautious.
It also may be that two colors on shirt are too contrasty, you decide.

[viktor]

they look briliant. The only thing that looks wierd is the talking wiew. It looks as he woučld be saying oh all the time. When I make a talking wiew I make 3 loops. The O, the A and the E loop. Then mix them in random order.

[Johnny Odd]

I agree with Viktor, add more mouth shapes than simply  :o
You should also make the head bob up and down by about 1 pixel when he speaks....    perhaps?

[Evil]

Yes, as far as the mouth goes, it should be huge. Not some little Michael Jackson mouth.



And theres something about the side view that doesnt look right.