Genesis - The Cartoon

Phemar · Sun 04/04/2004 13:02:16

Heh, I finally finished it. Genesis - The Cartoon:

Check it here: http://www.zorproductions.eds.saix.net/genesis.html

Please note that Genesis is an offensive cartoon to some people. Do not read this if you're in the mood to be offended.

Please note again: Genesis does feature bad drawing, I have improved as I drew this a while ago.

Tell me what you think!

Ginny · Sun 04/04/2004 13:44:59

"People who suffer from pregnancy"

I don't know if this was accidental or on purpose, but hehe.
Heh, nice comic, very funny imo.

Eggie · Sun 04/04/2004 14:33:54

Hehehehehe. Me like.

Phemar · Sun 04/04/2004 14:41:42

Quote from: GinnyW on Sun 04/04/2004 13:44:59
"People who suffer from pregnancy":D I don't know if this was accidental or on purpose, but hehe.
Heh, nice comic, very funny imo. :)

Heh, I realised that, and then thought to myself, "Hey! That's pretty funny!" So I left it.

Glad you guys like it.

Phemar · Thu 08/04/2004 06:56:38

Bumper Bumper, Nobody wants to comment.

Bumpy bumpy

bump bump

bumpity bumpity

bumped.

Gilbert · Thu 08/04/2004 07:06:36

Haha, didn't noticed it some time earlier.

I on;y read the first page and I must say it's quite "original" (I'll save the rest for reading later).

The only thing that bothered me was that the texts were a bit hard to read (probably bacause of the scanning, I think), maybe you can refine them or type them with your graphic app.

* Gilbot V7000a likes the comic.

Phemar · Thu 08/04/2004 07:24:27

Quote from: Gilbot V7000a on Thu 08/04/2004 07:06:36
The only thing that bothered me was that the texts were a bit hard to read (probably bacause of the scanning, I think), maybe you can refine them or type them with your graphic app.

Um no, I think thats just my handwriting...

But I will refine them when I get the time!

Nacho · Thu 08/04/2004 08:44:33

Quote from: ZorÂ© on Thu 08/04/2004 07:24:27
Quote from: Gilbot V7000a on Thu 08/04/2004 07:06:36
The only thing that bothered me was that the texts were a bit hard to read (probably bacause of the scanning, I think), maybe you can refine them or type them with your graphic app.

Um no, I think thats just my handwriting...

But I will refine them when I get the time!

Advise... never write in the comics that have to be scanned if you don't have nice "comic" writing... you can add the text in any painting program...

Igor · Thu 08/04/2004 09:32:40

Haha, that was funny- good work! I especially liked the first two pages.
What amuses me is, that i'm just drawing similar thing. It's also called Genesis and it's parody on Bible- mixing it with Darwin's theory (of course, since the comic is for kids, the writer didn't go all the way with offensive humor). Really funny coincidence

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Here's part of one of the tables (hope you don't mind me posting this in your thread- if you do, i'll remove it

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Gilbert · Thu 08/04/2004 09:41:54

Igor never stops from amazing me --> us.

Spoiler

And finally I know a bit what the comic strip you last posted was about now.

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Hopefully we will have a chance on reading the whole set of comics with complete dialog texts later.

Phemar · Thu 08/04/2004 16:50:19

Hah, good one igor, i remember the pther table being posted earlier...

Thanks everyone for the comments!

MrColossal · Thu 08/04/2004 20:04:18

I like your humour, and by that I mean it's ok to like Monty Python but don't copy word for word from them. Take the inspiration from them but let your own style shine through.

The comedy that I recognized as your own was much funnier than reciting the holy handgrenade part from Holy Grail.

The whole Adam and Steve thing was funny [not to be rude but did you come up with that yourself? If so I enjoyed it a lot]

also, may i suggest having actual thumbnails for the comics and not just resized in browser comic pages?

otherwise keep up the good work and i look forward to more from you

Phemar · Fri 09/04/2004 05:54:48

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I like your humour, and by that I mean it's ok to like Monty Python but don't copy word for word from them. Take the inspiration from them but let your own style shine through.

The comedy that I recognized as your own was much funnier than reciting the holy handgrenade part from Holy Grail.

Um yeah, about that, you see I had seen the Holy Grail ages ago when I was small, and somehow things like that crept into my subconciuos, ao when I drew that last year, I had these ideas in my head which weren't exactly mine, but Monty Pythons, except I didn't know that. Then recently I got the holy grail on DVD, and I was like "WTF?d00d?" and I realised what I had done was copyrighted material, and I said "Damn!"

QuoteThe whole Adam and Steve thing was funny [not to be rude but did you come up with that yourself? If so I enjoyed it a lot]

Yeah that part I came up with myself. Thanks.

Peter Thomas · Fri 09/04/2004 12:44:17

I like the comic!

I'm a christian, [so insert random comments about how various bits were oh-so-slightly offensive blah blah blah], but on the whole, I thought it was very well done.

Your humour is similar to mine... 'bout a year ago I wrote a whole series about a pickle who was granted super-powers. Surprisingly, his name was Super Pickle.

I loved the bit about the spinach and the 10 commandments...

"well...not really"... haha