Darkness

Started by [Cameron], Wed 20/10/2004 08:24:32

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[Cameron]

I have a poem. This time it is free of cliches (hopefully). The art you see is done by Farlander. I handed this in to my English Techer to put on the wall. The art isn't graded, only the poem and i told her the artwork wasn't mine anyway. I really needed so it looked presentable. Anyway, the poem. C+C a must.
http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Darkness4.doc

Nacho

Hey, thanks for the quoting! It was not really necessary, it was a ten-minute work...

I can't really crit the poem... Sounds good for me, but I am crappy at English. Any improvements I would recommend should definitelly finish in a "F" by your teacher.  ;D
Are you guys ready? Let' s roll!

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