Need some fixing of this walkcycle

[Chicky]

hey people,

i did this walkcycle a while ago for a game im working on, i recently re looked at the cycle and it just isnt right. Im going  for a cartoony feel, much like ILB what time is it or the recently posted pics by DxTR. I need a change to the face and also the legs, they just dont look cartoony enough.



Im not quite sure what to do so i really could use some help from the community, please guys ... any help ... paintovers?

thanks in advance

- a chicken

[The Weird Sir]

Looks cartoony to me. The main problem in my view is the way his expression suddenly changes when he faces the camera. Maybe he's upset to see me?  

[Chicky]

Sorry guys,

it looks like freewebs is messin up, noone can see the pic i posted. Ahh well, you dont know what your missing lol.

[Scummbuddy]

even though you are using freewebs, you still have to use the annonymizer...

yeah, the expression does change, and maybe the eyebrows are a little too pronounced, but maybe it works for the style. That'd be okay.

Maybe a little more addition of definition to the body, for curves under the clothes that show through to the clothes.

But I do like the style of the character. Keep up the good work.